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【ILETS雅思小教室】雅思口語8分範文分析

本文為大家帶來雅思口語8分範文分析,將會通過範文的優缺點和雅思口語四大評分標准出發,為範文打分,指出範文的優缺點,希望能夠給大家一些幫助。考生也可以選擇自己覺得比較好或者感興趣的範文進行參考學習。

下面以社交網絡類話題social networking為例,為大家仔細講解考官提供的範文。當然,此範文的評價是除去語音和現場發揮狀況的分數考量,而從詞彙,句式,連貫度以及思維方式幾個方面進行評判,僅供參考。

 1. What kinds of social networking websites do you like to use?

Um…I suppose the main one I use is weibo, which is basically the equivalent of Twitter in the West. And um… as well as that, I occasionally use a website called renrenwang, which is essentially a Chinese version of Facebook, although I don't really use it as much as I used to, because I think weibo's a bit better.

“你喜歡使用哪種社交網站?”這裡的回答是微博,考生可以注意一下,開始的“Um…I suppose……”似乎是有停頓的,但是為什麼還能夠得高分呢?其實雅思口語適當的停頓並不是壞事,有時候還能夠給大家思考答案的時間,上述的I suppose其實就表明了回答者在思考。再來看which is……非限定性定語從句,對微博的解釋,相當於西方的Twitter。And um… as well as that連接詞,順承到人人網的介紹,中文版的臉書,及其優勢。整個回答十分完整,定語從句和讓步狀語從句使句式避免單一,詞彙顯然是合格的。有明顯的連接詞和交流標記詞,雖然有停頓但是能夠給人一種在思考,與人交流的感覺,所以整個回答不管是從詞彙,句式還是連貫度上都是非常優秀的範文,而且能夠讓人感受到交流的氛圍是十分難能可貴的。


考生還可以參考積累下面提煉出來的一些短語和詞彙:

 the equivalent of – 相等於

 Essentially -大體上;基本上

 Chinese version – 中國版

2. Is it easy to find real friends on a social networking site?

I'm honestly not that sure because I've never really made a big effort to find friends on the Internet, but thinking about it, I'd say it's probably not that easy, although it's definitely possible, because um… I think you never quite know someone properly until you've met them in the flesh. At least that's been my experience anyway!

“在社交網站上交到真正的朋友簡單嗎?”——首先,坦白的說,是不確定的,因為沒有試圖在社交網站上交過朋友。但是but thinking about it, I'd say it's probably not that easy, although it's definitely possible, because轉折連詞和交流標記詞同時使用,陳述自己的看法……整個銜接是非常緊密的。而且在句式詞彙上的運用也是沒有問題的。同時也能夠給人以英式思維思考交流的感覺。所以綜合起來此答案也在8分的水平。


下面是一些比較地道的詞彙、短語,考生可以參考使用:

 Properly - thoroughly, completely; 徹底地

 In the flesh - 本人

 At least that's been my experience anyway! - 至少按照我的經驗是這樣的!

綜上所述,一篇優秀的範文,考生必須作到詞彙句式符合高分要求,內容的銜接和連貫必須緊湊,且最好能夠給人一種交流的感覺和信號,讓人感覺到地道且是考場上的交流感,此外,最好運用一些比較地道的詞彙和句式,也會為你的答案加分不少。